Okay you hide then. I’ll
count to ten and then come looking. Don’t go too far…
One… Two… Three...
Four... Five... Six... Seven... Eight... Nine………….. Ten! Ready or not here I come.
Palms over face I stood listening. He was near. I could hear
him. His breath full of excitement… quiet giggles… twigs breaking under his
feet.
I can hear you, you know.
You’re making it way too easy. I’ll count to ten once more. Find somewhere
better to hide. One... Two... Three... Four... Five... Six... Seven... Eight...
Nine………….. Ten!
Silence……….
I listened… seconds ticking away… no sound of him. I took my
palms off and opened my eyes. A maze of giant trees greeted my sight. Trunks so
huge it was almost like I was walled inside. I looked up. The dense canopy let
through only thin slivers of light… not enough to find him. A hundred trees
blocked the path in every direction. I stood there indecisive and still. It’d
never been this way before. He was terrible at this game. It hardly took me a
minute to find his hiding place. And then he’d ask me to close my eyes and
count again. But this time… this time there was no sign of which way he went…
no shoe trail… no hushed giggles. It was getting darker by the second now and I
couldn’t make up my mind on which way to go looking. If I went the wrong way I risked
us both getting lost. I’d stay I decided. I’d stay here for he couldn’t have
gone far. I sat down beneath a tree and my mind started counting.
One... Two... Three...
Four... Five... Six... Seven... Eight... Nine…………..
And I counted… I counted till the highest number I knew. And
then everything went dark.
Somewhere else, in another world, a heart monitor fell flat.
really beyond
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ReplyDeleteLoved the uncertainty and also how we all look at the unknown in our own weird ways.
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